Oh God
the vocabularies supplicated to you
are the sugary and absolute
imparting the honor and rainbow
to my whispers
by the voyage you approved for me
to access in the village of your good wishes
Oh God...
A contest entry
- Write a poem about the picture by BethanyBoo.
700 points, ended December 18, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hGod...
Comments
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Beautiful poem. You have a wonderful talent.
Good luck with your writings.
Yorkshire Bard. Blessings
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i like how you wrote about god in the poem it was very clever to think of that. thank you for entering my competition.
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"imparting the honor and rainbow
to my whispers" - Beautiful. You are so unique and clever.
I love your take on things.
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I am not surprised by your response to the picture ... you see things from your unique slant and how our journey towards the Divine is in every manifestation we experience, even if it seems that the experience has no relevance towards this journey.
thanks.
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unique response to the picture...realy shows how the writer could see God in everything congrats and best regards!
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strange, but sweet
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Just a beautiful take on the picture prompt as always your words are so meaningfully crafted dear Prabhu Much love Lib x x
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