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Dissociated

outside of myself
like in a dream
but wide awake
away from me
disconnected
unplugged
although I seem tuned in
I am out
of my mind
dissociated from this social situation
on auto pilot with robotic responses
dead end roads of forced conversation
where have I gone?
this should have been fun
a few friends, some drinks, music in the background
but I am gone
I walk out to the balcony for some fresh air
and try to gather myself, my thoughts
I lean over to get a better view
of the city at night
inching just a little further..
oh, it would have been so easy,
to just slip and fall into oblivion





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  • double-u
    August 18
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    so good

    I got goosebumps


  • Stormbringer
    June 20

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    dissociated from this social situation
    on auto pilot with robotic responses
    dead end roads of forced conversation

    and

    oh, it would have been so easy,
    to just slip and fall into oblivion

    are my favorite parts