beyond
emerald trees
and crystal streams
a milk-white
lily, grows
Author notes
made in china
A contest entry
- last 10 by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended December 15, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Truly beautiful! I started this way, but not with such brillance...yet I truned to a different approach with less beauty...lovely metaphor and imagery.
Congrat's on the Silver, my friend.
mystic

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stunning... x
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interesting take on china, products, nice 10 word choices good luck


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such lovely imagery here , I love it. well done with this write



