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China Doll


beyond
emerald trees
          and crystal streams

a milk-white
        lily,        grows



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made in china

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Truly beautiful! I started this way, but not with such brillance...yet I truned to a different approach with less beauty...lovely metaphor and imagery.
    Congrat's on the Silver, my friend.
    mystic


  • Lavender Butterfly
    December 15, 2008
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    stunning... x

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 14, 2008
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    interesting take on china, products, nice 10 word choices good luck


  • EeyoreUK
    December 14, 2008
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    such lovely imagery here , I love it. well done with this write