I couldn't seem to see it,
the way that I felt,
and now I understand it.
It was love.
It was sad,
how so long ago,
I was so screwed up,
so broken...
and you saved me
from myself.
You picked me up,
when I was down,
you brought me home,
when I was lost,
and now that your gone,
I realized your critical reviews...
They saved me.
You saved me
I love you.
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True, yes. I hope you enjoy, best of luck judging.
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- I can't believe I'm doing this again Part Deux by NoUseForAName.
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