It's hard to mend a broken heart,
throwing this away,
tearing me apart.
I was angry,
though I knew you were hurting as well,
I couldn't find the right in it to hurt me too.
You swore you wouldn't
and yet you did.
We're just friends but I still love you more then that.
think about you kills me,
knowing it will never be more hten thinking,
thoughts provoking me mind to wander,
hearts racing,
I stop and wonder if I could help you this time
in stead of you attepting to help me.
I swore that if you died while all slept at night,
I would cry one last time then take my life.
for you I would die,
though knowing you were not here to know
that I would never love another.
Eh?
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i love it.
u are an amazing writer. i can feel the anger, and at the same time i feel the love...
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i dont really know what to say
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good poem
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I loved this poem. It was so good. The emotions were real, and the flow was like harmony. You're truly a good writer, so keep it up! Great job!
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... i really liked it
very intense and so many emotions
great write
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whoa! the emotions here are just WHOA i love how intense and deep this is, it was just so raw very very sad, but very very well penned. you expressed how you feel very well, great write
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thank you :]
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This is good...
I like it.
But who the heck is Jo????
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wait haha waht Jo who? I dont remembver lol
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This poem rocks
"i would cry one last time then take my life" that was my favorite line its exaclly what i woul do!LOVE IT!!!
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aw thanks, yeah I was in some pretty shitty times when I wrote this.... am kind of still in them actually.lol.
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awwww!!!
i know what you mean, completely!
this is so beautiful, who did you write this about?
the whole thing is awesome, i love your style!
kAsSiE
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its about a guy that I like... but yeah... its stupid :/
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it's not stupid, it's beautiful. B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!! go ahead, say it! now say it louder!!!
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uh... beautiful?
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You are amazing. This actually kinda brought tears to my eyes.. i love it.
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Awe! Hun!! only I am suppose to cry!! lol
*hugs* I sorry it made you cry, idk if it was in a good way or not lol I totally balled like a bitch when I wrote this lol I was so upset its not even funny lol
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Haha i'm sorry i cried! Of course it was in a good way, because this poem is amazing and there isn't a bad way to cry to this! Lol. if that even makes sense... lol. Aww well i'm sorry to hear you were that upset! that's never fun. But poems do come out pretty amazing when people write when upset.
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they do they do. Yeah I was totally balling my eyes out when I wrote this lol
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Damn you write fucking amazing. I need to come back over here more often to see what you have written. Love it.
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Er, I dont really ever write, just when I feel like shit and people advise me to do so :/
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aww this is so sweet i love it!!!!!!! ♥
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Thanks
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WEEEE.
awwwhh this is a pretty poem, lady lover. i think the only thing awkward about it is my comment. lol
-- peace buddy.
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haha um yeah, there is soething very wrong with that sentance "awwwhh this is a pretty poem, lady lover." but I'll shut up about it lol
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bwahahahahaa you love it, don't even lie.
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no... its... im not a ladylover lol
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it was incredable, sad, but still amazed me. Thanks for posting it.
~Shaant
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yup, im glad you liked it
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i can relate to this. im sad now, its beautiful. i love it. thank you.
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aw your welcome!!!
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this is incredably sad, but many people could probably relate to it. a broken heart is the hardest thing to deal with, and we all have to some time in life. but we all usually seem to find a way to make it through and i hope you do too. no one deserves to suffer. great write! hang in there. :]
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Thanks lots
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Sad ,but i think alot of people could relate to it
This is sooo sad, I wish you didn't have such a sad thing happen to you. I like the honesty and emotion you put in this poem. I also think it's a story that in some way or another alot of people can relate to. So many people have loved some one as more then a friend but had their heart blown to pieces when they found out the other person didn't love them that way. If it was my poem i'd add more of the five senses ,but it's not my poem.
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Yeah, it hurts likea bitch lol
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Well done!
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thanks
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u'r welcome!!
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Not bad
Very angsty, and very honest.
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yeah... very honest.
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very good, love it, i life this feeling everyday and you sumed up in about 20 or more lines,
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Oh, yeah thanks, took me a week to write and it still isn't good enough.
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are you joking its perfect
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its horrible :/ I wrote it for someone but it sucks and yeah...
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you should read some of my stuff, now that sucks
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haha I bet it doesn't
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