We let ourselves go
like leaves on a windy day.
Tired of being entrapped
by restrictive rules
that twines around our lives.
We'll race under the sun
and stay up late.
Laugh at our simple jokes.
Reveal secrets and act
like children. Sleep
till afternoon with our
bodies curled around
one another. Then
played out, we'll return
to our busy lives.
In a list
A contest entry
- Love? by isabellacohen.
550 points, ended December 29, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I loved the simplicity of your poem
I love the simplicity of your poem, the free abandon and the warmth of curling up together,
thanks for entering,
best wishes,
Isabella -
Precious~
Oh My Word this is Precious my Friend~ You sure have a way with words and spilled much emotion onto this page which could be felt~
Bravo! Excellent
Woot
Keep that quill dancing~ Yay!!
Love the: reveal secrets and act like children-
Beautifully said...
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Many synonms for Great
I felt like this had to do with a love affair some sort...perhaps ? either way, you're one of my favorites for a reason! great peace
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Can I be like a leaf and blow away...or make like a tree and stay planted...nice take on loving one another...your words just flow and project. Blessings
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umm lovley
the description of a perfect evening of love, makes me smile with pleasant memories
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words seems to dance for you my friend and that is something i admire about you writing and you too, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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