Starting a warm fire
As the sun sets in the sky
Where will travel?
Into the stars this night?
Let us wonder this while we sit by the ember light
As our minds wander together to somewhere new
What will we find together tonight?
Silenced by the outside
What has been said to you?
At the end why does it matter?
When your a creation from the sky
Finally your mind rests by the ember light
As the Holy Spirit holds you warm creativity tonight
Will you find the right words to say?
When the this time is over
And the fire has burned and died
Maybe your mind will always wander
By the crimson shade of ember light
A contest entry
- pretty much ANYTHING goes. by etoile.
825 points, ended January 11, 43 entries
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Comments
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i really like the end stanza, even with the rhyming. i loved the imagery in it, it's beautiful.
i didn't really like all the questioning in the beginning though. nice poem.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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I really like this!
This was a great poem, lots of feeling and insight. Thank you for sharing this! -
I think that its amazing. <3 Its very nicely done. ^^
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