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I feared more than anything his hands,
The power he unknowingly clenched inthem
I felt him shift auras,
His eyes now fixedly toward me as if to condemn.
Forcing me to perform these outrageous demands.

Hour after hour, day after day, i watched them become past,
eternity.
This is my punishment,
for bitter enmity,Contempt now creates a bitter contrast
For how much longer will this last??



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