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pain runs throu the veins



the pain that runs throu my veins
causes me to put a wall up
so nobody can get through
I lie next to you every night hoping
you dont realize ive been looking u in the eye
telling you i love you
and not meaning it
for i dont want to let u hurt me again
like the rest did
For i might not be able to bare it
I was raised up on pain.

Might not live throu it again
so I have boldened up
and blocked every feeling out of my body
hoping u wont realize how i feel
I dont care
what u think
for ive been hurt to much
Pain runs throu my veins instead of love
i wear no love on my sleeve
my heart is not longer the color of a rose
its the color of darkness!

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