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Dance the Night Away

Will you dance with me
And sing wih me
Until the dawn does come
You can promise me
That you'll never leave
And tell me I'm the one

The moon is in the sky
Shining so very bright
On you and me tonight
So put me in your arms
And hold me close
And never let me go

Dancing the night away
Beneath the stars
All our dreams come true
Twirling joyously
We will start to sing
Of happiness and love

Author notes

I used title number 30- Dance the night away
Okay and while i was writing this it turned into more of a kind of song than a poems so I'm not exactly sure how it will read as a poem. ((Personally I think it's kind of bad))
It didn't help that I haven't written anything in a while either so..

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  • silvertongue
    December 15, 2008

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    this is really good.
    when i saw u wrote sumthing new i just had to check it out.
    i really like it.....
    just wondering though,...
    is this about anyone specific?^_^


  • HeavensNewestAngel
    December 13, 2008
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    This is a great poem you wrote. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest!


  • wanderingpaths
    December 13, 2008
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    aww tis love (: