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Machines.

Ego salto


Ego peto amoris


Ego accipio non vox


Ego sed nihil videt machinae


Modo machinae

Author notes

It's in very shaky Latin. Don't use a translator.
It's supposed to mean:
I dance.
I seek love.
I hear no voice.
I see nothing but machines.
Only machines.

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  • Quotidian Detritus
    December 22, 2008

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    Lol, you don't have to use "ego" every time, it's built into the verb.
    I like it though, the length is interesting, and the ending is mournful and makes you think.
    -Gerard


  • samantha jean
    December 13, 2008

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    Very sad and painful.
    Short, but has such great meaning to it.
    This holds a lot of purpose to me.
    Wonderful write.