I find myself drawn to you.
To the curves of your body;
the swagger in your style.
The beauty of the aura,
the power of your mind.
I can’t help but wish to spend
moments at a time worshiping you.
I find myself lusting for you.
The strengths you carry
And the weaknesses you hold.
The gift you bring to the world,
and the blessing you bring to me.
I can’t help myself cause, I know
I want to be with you.
Author notes
Hello my name is Aaron and i am a woman-aholic.
and it is true i love women, big, thin, young or old, i can't control myself, it is the beauty of them that gets me every time. but this is not for every women in the world, no, this is one of five poems i am dedication to the many women in my life, on here and and off. it is short cause i just started and i have some work to do on the others but the fifth one is kind of a story and it will come soon, i hope, lol. To the women in my life i thank you, even if i don't talk to you much on here, you poems inspire me, and you inspire me, keep it flowing and thanks for you time.
Aaron
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i do plan to edit so any and all advise is welcome, or just drop a line and tell me what you think
Comments
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This was very very good casue I know what you mean. Wemon are the best in all shaps and sizes. When you find one that is also smart then you have landed a winner. From the poem to the note great work SH
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Awesome
This is great, I really enjoy reading your poems
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Just loved it.
Wow.... killer job, Aaron. Well written, distinct and powerful enough to make up for the shortened length. Tears was so right- you really make your women feel like they have the power to rule the world... and still wouldn't trade it for the way you look at 'em. Amazing write. Just loved it.
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whomever this was written for.....she is a lucky woman, this is a beautiful dedication, well written
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You were
Always one with the words to make a woman feel special. It's good to finally see you pay respect to them. I can't wait for the next four and if they are already on here, then I want the links to read them old buddy.. Kahy -
Your lines and style have an amazing flow.
This is gorgeous.
I can’t help but wish to spend
moments at a time worshiping you.
Very relatable. Good work.
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i luv this poem... very intuative.. and im a girl
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Interestingly, convincingly real...
Wishing you all the best. 
Peace, Cyn 
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This is a damn good poem man, i feel this way to bout somebody so i know wut ur feeling, man great write.
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Beautiful
the sweetness of words
the tenderness of thoughts
create a perfect symphony
within your heartbeats
from where the melodies are heard
within each line from the start till the end
so keep on creating masterpieces
that we all can read
Beautifully written my dear as always... apologize for the delayed response - haven't been much on the site... better late than never - take care Minoo
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this is really beautiful. so far ive really enjoyed reading your poems. i may have just found another favorite.
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once again, you and the sweet talk.
god i wish my man would say he wants to worship me. lol
i am glad i am a lady in your life so i can try to look at this
like it is kinda for me.
great write, and you kept it flowing.
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woman-aholic or womanizer,, amp!!
such a strong piece and in-detail to praise a woman and giving them an importance in your life..
-such a sweet way of expressing how they are in your daily life, and if i am one of those? it's 100% to appreciate this piece.. this is cool!!!!!
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"Hello my name is Aaron and i am a woman-aholic"
[all together] "Hi Aaron"
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Oh wow, that's pretty cool. If you happen to have one person in mind, then she's one lucky chick... and if you don't... Then wow, you're good. -
I absolutely love to read poems such as this, you penned a beautiful write.
So romantic and sweet.
As far as editing advise I have none.
As always you penned a perfect piece... from your heart
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you are true sweetheart to thank the female poets for
their feminine strength and prowess.
May you always be gracious of heart and what a great
gift to listen carefully with your soul and ink
to hear the power we offer in our feminine messages
and poems.
ears/Seattle
way to write!
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Lovely Aaron, hope I am one of the lucky women!!!
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Wonderful! This poem makes me smile. It's direct with a vivid message. My favorite part is that the poem recognizes the female mind; how refreshing! With an attitude like this I can see that you must be very popular with the ladies.
Love,
Amera♥
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gorgeous as always doll
keep em coming
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Aww a beautiful little piece, love the emotions you have portrayed. My only advice would be to try and edit round some of the 'you' the word does pop up a lot especially in the second verse, just my thoughts tho
Love the AN 
A woman-aholic hey! Sure you won't be alone there..lol. A neat read hunni
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Very positive
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This is wonderful hon I enjoyed reading this! It was written well and very heart felt. Keep penning hon
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this poem is excellent. its raw, truthful and I'm glad that you sent me the link. the honesty throughout this piece is amazing. be yourself, that's what I say.. honesty for me goes a long way. inspiration comes from many things, people etc,. you've done a fantastic job with this.
mommy
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Beautiful!
This is amazing. You have an undescribible way of appreciating all women. I wonder who this is for? LOL! Keep it flowing. The Jade Princess : Tawni
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WOW! This is beautiful, any woman who is able to grace your arms and heart of love, is surely lucky. Lovely, in the sense that it creates such emotions and feelings. Why can't you live in Minnesota?!?!
xoxo
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This is a beautifully sensual poem. Honestly I melted within the lines of this. It shows the heart of a true lover. I adored the simplicity found within it mingled with the advanced choice of words. It is the truest of talents when you can take simple words and weave them into something far from a cliche... molding them into the core of the deepest emotions. Those are the poems that will leave a forever memory across the minds and heart of each reader. Thank you for the chance to be inspired once again by a work of art.
Amy
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aw this piece is full fo emotion and beautifully pen'd my friend. I loved it!
thanks for my comments as well I appreciated them
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Wow. This is absolutely beautiful. I love the flow and truthfulness.
You're very real.
Stay that way.
Much love.
~*~SP
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Interesting work here and I love your honesty in it. Not too many people can actually admit that about themselves. Great work here and thanks for sharing it. Keep up the wonderful work here!
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What I love about this poem
is that it feels so very natural...
there is nothing pretentious
about it...it's simply you and
your heart on paper. Love, Lane
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Woman-aholic
love that. How many men couldn't say that?
The title is interesting. It tells something but not quite all there is. It drew me in as a reader. It shows lack of control and the ellipsis felt rather alluring to me.
Some of the imagery here was good, such as "the beauty of your aura" (just an example).
"the swagger in you style." - nice image and alliteration.
"you mind" - "your mind"?
I like how the two stanzas are similar in structure. However, I find them a bit redundant; that is, the repetition could be used very nicely here, but I think you overdid it by a bit. Also, if you do plan to edit, one or two more concrete details in each stanza would probably make your poem more real, in my opinion.
Oh, by the way - not sure you intended this, but there's a nice gradual increase of emotion from "I find myself drawn to you" to "I find myself lusting for you" and finally "I want to be with you". In the first of these three lines, I sense lack of control "I find myself" and then the participle suggests lack of any action by you, this is like you're an observer of your most primary emotions. Then, the second one still suggests lack of control, but you show a more voluntary response, "lusting". Then, the last line is perfect as an ending - from complete lack of action, you've gone to willpower and and an actual decision as to what you want.
If you edit, it'd be nice (from my perspective) if you kept your poem focused around these three moments.
This isn't (yet) particularly unique, but I see a lot of potential in it.
Hope this helps
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I loved it Aaron
and your poems
keep them rocking
Roses to you sweet friend
Teresa
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My brother is a women-aholic? Oh no, how scary! Tho, this makes me wonder who this poem is for, she sure is a lucky one for this is a beautiful poem!
Good luck on writing the remaining four poems!
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What beautiful dedication to the fairer sex ..it has a wonderful honesty about it that some deny themselves ...your poem sets a good example and great communication of your feelings to the ladies of this world
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WOW !
That is awesome ! YOu must have been talking about me it is beautiful! lovely flow and you did keep it flowing all the way down to the ending!
Perfect!!
Rend
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My
Seems just last night I felt this way. Oh the magnetism of another that cause us to wish, hope & lust. Well done poet.
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I would be proud to have such a poem dedicated to me - I think every woman would!
Some typos need clearing up - lines 2,3 and 5 'you' should be 'your' , line 7 should be 'worshipping' and I think 'cause' should be written as 'cause, abbreviation.
I like the gentle, thoughtful tone to this poem. Keep the flow going, Aaron, you're doing well.
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Wow Aaron, that was wonderfully writen! So sweet. You are a very good writer, very talented. It is a pleasure to read your work
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wow. nicely done
ummm...haha....strange..a woman aholic...lol.
take care and keep writing
Stephanie ♥
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