the dance floor is our universe
in harmony with the music
you follow my every step
protected by my shadow
holding your body close to mine
I move in turn with you
in total eclipse
we have become one
in embrace of the new year
Author notes
Prompt: Eclipse - limitation 50 words
A contest entry
- another prompt inspired QUICKIE!! by etoile.
750 points, ended December 14, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is wonderfully romantic and full of lovely thought.
A splendid piece of poetry indeed.
Be blessed in all you do.
Tony
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wow this is really good. the imagery is beautiful, and the way this is written is amazing. i like your take on the prompt. the ending is also very strong. i love the first couple lines, they're my favourite.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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