The silence is deafening
as it screams throughout my head.
Making me beg forgiveness
for all the things I have said.
I have been a total bitch
and treated you unfair.
Wanting depserately to talk to you
but feeling such dispair.
I've apologized so many times
now my words don't mean a thing.
Though there is still a tiny bit
of hope that I must surely cling.
You told me you don't hold grudges
I hope that is still true.
Because I value your friendship
and miss the talking we would do.
I hope you can forgive me
this time I am sincere.
And I really care
I want to make that clear.
Until my plea is answered
your silence will scream.
My heart will never mend
at least for now it seems.
Please tell me what you think
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I really liked this piece.


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In the bible it says love "keeps no record of being wronged" and "if you do not forgive people their offenses, your Father will not forgive your offenses." Some people draw out the worst in us so we must choose our friends wisely.

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Forgiveness unecessary...for friends like these


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strong heartfelt words that just make you feel every hit, i mean that is what each word feel like, as you get into the poem, keep it flowing, a truly sad poem.
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aaww..
this is so so sad my friend..i hope you can get your problem resolved soon. a very heartfelt plea..

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