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Keith the Kitten Lover

Kitten contests inspire me
Each as awesome as can be
Icciness is my forte
Tenderness in every way
Heavenly as verse can be.

A contest entry

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    Nicely done, Keith! Thank you for sharing your AP name with me in such a special way. Good luck in the contest.


  • iamlost gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    I love that last line, beautiful! This is a sweet, touching little piece, and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for giving me a peek at your self through this poem.
    Well penned,
    ~lost


  • chills
    December 14, 2008

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    Did I miss the kitten poem?!

    Knife sharp on my spelling
    Exciting with his verse
    Intuitively telling
    The bad days from the worse
    Humour without flaws.......
    ................
    KEITH is all of this
    Now sweetie - have applause x

    Ok - crap metre - but you don't do Iccy!

    I raise my second cuppa to you, big love, Debs