Roses are red,
and violets are blue,
you once had my business,
this is true.
and if your waiting for me to return,
then I am afraid you will find,
that you are doing nothing more,
than wasting your time.
Because I can save more each month,
without the Bellsouth Preferred Pack,
even with your unlimited local calling,
your long distance service and cash back.
But the one thing that is odd to me,
is the time you have spent,
trying to get me back,
since on my way, I went.
For you see, if years ago,
you had just reduced your rates,
you could be saving money now,
on your cards, offers and rebates.
Before I had a choice,
you didn't seem to care,
Everytime I turned around,
you were raising this rate or that fare.
So please remove me from your list,
and leave me alone,
I have found a better company,
that can give me more than just a phone.
A contest entry
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If only companies knew more about their customers. Imagine sending such a simple poem to a master of the art. Ridicule and satire are waiting for such... Thanks for playing along! -
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Very creative response. This has a song type rhythm to it, well put together. A brillant write, I wish I had thought of. Phone companies can be a bit .. ah annoying.
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