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Jumble

I found her
Beauty
In this perfectly imperfect Hell
The waves behind me crashing
Beautiful creature
Death toll's crazy inflamation
Take me. . . .
The pain that I want
in a graveyard sadly grieving
mixed messages I'm seeing

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Interesting brook, very interesting :)

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  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    Hmm well ryan i love the poem but wtf is with the Bunny's? Seriously Bunny's? Lol anyways love the poem, thanks and good luck..


  • Shacadia Shay
    December 14, 2008
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    i lyk this one, i don't know what it is but i just lyk it