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Terminator

I am made to murder, to terminate;
I hurt others to help my kind's fate.
No longer do I want to kill,
but I'm afraid I have no will.
So as I execute those of your kind,
just remember, it was the way I'm designed.
I'm sorry it has to be this way,
but I don't have the power to disobey.

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sorry! i know it is completely horrible. but i tried...

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  • Dark Otter
    December 30, 2008

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    Cute!

    You made this villian likable. This is a tough assignment and you gave it a legitimate try. Your creative take is very welcom in this contest. Thank you!