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A Servant Is No Greater Than His Master

If jesus came to my house
i'd ask him to come in
have a seat and let dinner begin.

Pass the bread
drink the wine
"master, is everything fine?"

He would say
"oh, I'm okay"
"now let us pray".

We would start to eat
then after that I'd wash his feet
thus making everything complete.

Then he'd say "now its my turn"
"my lord, this i did not earn"
"but this lesson you should learn".

That love is to be passed on
"a servant is no greater than his master".

























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  • second-born
    December 25, 2008

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    this is such a lovely piece...depicting how the Master is a living proof of humility to all His servants...thank you for sharing this...


  • Denerica silver member
    December 14, 2008
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    Amen

    I work in a nursing home and tell those that get smart with me about being a CNA, well Jesus washed his diciples feet, so I don't look at it the way you do, I am taking care of you. Yes, He is our Master, our Friend and He would do the same, such humbleness depicted here...lovely. Blessings


  • liltulip gold member
    December 13, 2008
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    absolutely

    beautiful
    thanks for sharing!


  • Femmalicious1
    December 13, 2008
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    Awesome write. This is a lesson that we should keep in mind at all times.

  • Eusebius
    December 13, 2008

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    Ah, yes, some sage words here! A fine poem! It is a shame that many really believe it. Excellent! bravo! bravo!!!


  • 2lullabyhaven
    December 13, 2008

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    Ahhh, this is my baby girl, I am loving her flow, don't you know hahhaa you've nailed this one, my love wishing you success in the contest lol


    • natashathepoet
      December 13, 2008
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      mon dont act like you didn't no ,you were the first to comment and the first to HELP me with it.............. .ha ha ha

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