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Becoming Wolf -Silver




cast mask
plastered gauze
stippled

duct-taped mouth
painted over with lips
and teeth white as fangs
in moonlight

I am wolf woman
angry
dangerous

howling under blue nights
seeking out
inhumanities

suckling women
by daylight

on dropped-milk courage





Author notes

Background created by fortyninereasons and will be used by me only for this contest and until this contest is over. I will remove it from my files and backgrounds on closing and judging.
It comes from - deviant art: Afraid_Of_The_Dark_by_DarkAngelsRhapsody

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  • tomisb
    December 14, 2008

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    We use the clay of the world to explore the facets of our idenity. The brave find the the light and dark of their personal power. They don't toy with only honor the entire vision of thier humanity and the magic in their souls. You have shown this beautifully in tight symbolic cant of the shaman you are.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Cannonsfire
    December 13, 2008
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    Beautifully penned hun good luck in Juls contest C


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      December 23, 2008
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      ty cannonsfire. I appreciate you stopping by.


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      December 23, 2008
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      Sometimes our walk through our own darkness, makes us shine more brightly when we come through it. It is not that we do not have some shadows (I know I do). thank you tomisb for your kidn comments.