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Season Splendor



Watching the flowers flirt with seasons, outside the window;

birds once sheltered in the South, fly forth and bless the blossoms;

litter meadows like rainbows, pink petunias & ruby red roses.

The sun smiles & crushes coldness, like bitter handed giants -
leaving fresh flower scented aromas & granuated coffee.
Windowsills welcome warmth, as they sigh goodbye to Winter

The road to tomorrow is pathed in pansies, glistening with pollen

honeybees and oak trees each come back to take a bow;

scenes splendor, earths erasure as the melanchony dies

& once frost ladden ground, now grows us grass; spring has now began.

Author notes

Rain-http://th02.deviantart.com/fs10/150/i/2006/120/6/7/rain_by_hclemon.jpg

Blossom- http://th05.deviantart.com/fs18/150/f/2007/145/2/e/Blossom_by_Yueshi.jpg

Cafe- http://th05.deviantart.com/fs36/150/f/2008/269/9/d/9d4da1c2c5d85271ebefa7e5977127e9.jpg

Magic-
http://th08.deviantart.com/fs13/150/i/2007/075/4/b/Magic_by_oloferla.jpg

Road- http://th00.deviantart.com/fs26/150/f/2008/037/d/c/dcce5ca322e3bf38.jpg



About how beautiful the world is when it turns from cold to warm.
I wish that everything could be turned from coldness to warmth.
Ah well.

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  • "
    The sun smiles & crushes coldness, like bitter handed giants -
    leaving fresh flower scented aromas & granuated coffee.
    Windowsills welcome warmth, as they sigh goodbye to Winter"

    Gosh I really liked that stanza
    You're quite right, this is a beautiful piece, flows very well and is just..... yeah

    Thank you for your entry
    I wish you the best of luck!
    Claire x


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 4

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    Beautiful piece! Absolutely lovely! I love the inspiration behind it too. The imagery and flow of this piece is superb!!! Good luck!!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    Hello there

    Your prompts are as follows --

    -- Rain
    -- Blossoms
    -- Cafe
    -- Magic
    -- Road

    Have fun!