I’m not sure:
do I like purple so much
because you told me violets
are your favorite flower;
or because you handed me
a promise ring,
with an amethyst
and ‘forever’ engraved on it?
--
either way, you left
and I was holding
a wilted flower
and a broken stone.
Author notes
prompt: violet
49 words
In a list
A contest entry
- quickie! by brandy..
400 points, ended December 13, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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that was a great, short poem. The ending summed it up beautifully. Good word choices. Nice job.
"Masquerade" -
Great take on the prompt! I entered this contest too and you so deserved the Gold! Hehe. Simple and beautiful. Well done
Much love
Ylova
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amazing!
this is really breath-taking. it was short yet so impactful, and your words were so full of emotions. keep penning and congratz on the gold u totally deserve it 
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omg this is amazing
the ending is brilliant!! brought everything together with a bam if that makes sense haha
love youu
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I lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove
this poem xD
It's so f*ckin' deadly!!!!
I love the way you divided it up.
Ugh I wish I was as talented as you.
Shelly
x
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very pretty honey i love it
you have no idea
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