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Blood Red Tears

I cry hard,
Yet mustn't,
Seeing desperation,
Tears that shouldn't,
Blood tears,
Blood diamonds of cool and damp sorrow,
Knives piercing,
And swords fighting,
Sorrow is sweet with no bitter cup to drink,
Sex glues me strong,
My mother's words don't beat anymore,
Trapping me here,
Trapping me everywhere...

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No i am not suicidal

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    December 15, 2008
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    I feel as though there is so much more to this then meets the eye..

    I love the use of "Blood Diamonds" it is a very unique image.
    Swords fighting sorrow is sweet, makes me think of all we fight to achieve.

    Interesting in a very unique way.

    Welcome to Allpoetry
    I hope that you enjoy the site, and if you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 14, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Uniquely abstract ~

    This is a great write; I found the originality flowing forth interesting as it kept my imagination running through different images

    Well done

    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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