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As I Grow

            As I grow older and wisened
            sun passing over the horizons
            memories of what it was to be
            a child viewing the world so big,
            Full of dreams of grander things.

            As I grow within body and mind
            with each passing of the full moon
            reflections of running wild like that
            of the stout buffalo and wild horses chasing,
            Playing games only a child would know.

            As I grow tender in heart and soul
            with each passing ripple of the river
            changes of the plains I once found
            open and free of boundaries now imposed,
            From man's greed and selifishness of others.

            As I grow giving and passionate
            with each season in time passing
            merices of the land's beauitful gifts
            shown to me in divine ways,
            Realities when I young at heart.

            As I grow weaker and feeble
            years of young at heart
            visions of grace upon me now
            while I've gained knowledge and truth,
            Experiences roaming the plains of my childhood.

          As I grow closer to my death
          each labored breath soon brings peace
          reflective journeys occur when I
          seeing now my childhood  a precious treasure
          independence to cherish as I depart my mortal body,
          With feathers of eagle I will float on the wind of my childhood.
         

           

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 30, 2008

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    Just beautiful and the pictures your words have penned sooth the heart softly...a gentle journey from childhood and back, to the crossing over upon the eagles wings...just wonderful and thank you kindly for entering


  • penman gold member
    December 27, 2008

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    Wonderful

    I like the repeat of the same phrase. Gives is a special lyrical quality. I think you had some great images. Best of luck in the contest.