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The Greatest Christmas Gift

Jesus was born in a stable.
No room for them at the inn.
Born of a Virgin an angel explained.

The angels proclaimed good tidings of joy.
To shepherds in fields as they lay.

Three wise men followed a star.
To see a most wondrous site.
To praise the king of kings.
Bringing him Gold, Frankincense and Myrrh.

God gave us his greatest Christmas gift.
His son, Jesus,who is our Yahweh (father).
Who died for our sins and is our salvation.

On His Birthday, give thanks and praise to God for the greatest gift of all.

Have a Blessed and Merry Christmas to you and your Kin.

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  • WesBreezyxxx
    December 25, 2008
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    NICE

    nice poem but it doesn't really ryhme. good luck
    whoops,


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    a gift

    to all to remember and to behold as we gained faith of his loss always to remember, thank you for this entry....good luck
    VOE


  • Rheea gold member
    December 19, 2008
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    beautiful and special


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    Beautifully Inspiring...

    Thank you so much for entering your heart-warming poem in my contest!! I'm wishing you all the best!!
    & ,
    xx Cyn xx


    • pain in colorado
      December 15, 2008
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      Thank you so much, I still am not up to the caliber of most here who write poems. I am still exploring what a poem truly is. I would appreciated your definition of a poem.

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