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the time has come

I don,t know how to feel
How am I meant to act?
Am I real?
Or just a figment of my own imagination

Sir, can you be clearer?
You feel so faint
I am running in confusement

Or am I just floating in mid air?

 

Look down on the clouded world

in my eyes

I can tell what is happening around me

 

But when I look in a mirror

People are just floating, dancing with joy

While I just stand their

Still, So still

My eyes are sad and longing

wondering

 

What is happening to me?

 

Sir, I feel like a puppet on a string

Sir, is it you why I feel so confused?

 

If it is then thank you

For opening my eyes

Giving me a clearer insite

of the world.

 

People are changing around me

But I stand 

still, so still

Watching the world go by

 

Then it hit me

Like someone punched me

In the face or

That I have ran into a brick wall

 

I need to feel as free as a bird

To soar in, in the air

Without a care in the world

 

My shell is opening

I am free

I am a new person

 

Thank you sir

You have completed the puzzle 

 

My cloudiness has gone

And so has you

 

I don't care what you think about me

I am me

 

The confusion should not get to me

Since me is me

And that you can't change

Even if the world is dead

And I am alive, floating, dancing in joy.

Author notes

this is how I feel when I was thinking of college I was so confused I did not know what to do. But I feel alot better now has a person. Feel more grown up

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  • Daisy Ballerina
    January 6
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    That's really good...
    Thank you for entering my contest!!