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Perhaps..you...




....
with soft touches
start fondling,
not to leave
spot's blankness
on satiny skin,
fingers willingly eager
to sway mischievously,
force me to sigh,
to encourage, shake, melt,
into a slow swing;
dancing on your tunes.













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Prompt: Option 1
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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    I really like your take on the prompt.. you did an excellent job with your poem. beautifully written.

    good luck
    kat


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 13, 2008

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    So Beautiful!!!!!!

    You have penned a lovely and sensual poem. Soothing to the reader's senses. Thank you for sharing. You take care. Hugs and Smiles. Sandy