....
with soft touches
start fondling,
not to leave
spot's blankness
on satiny skin,
fingers willingly eager
to sway mischievously,
force me to sigh,
to encourage, shake, melt,
into a slow swing;
dancing on your tunes.
Author notes
Prompt: Option 1
http://nakedlady.deviantart.com/art/girlish-dreams-III-79098958
35 words
A contest entry
- 10/35/40 Quickie! by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended December 14, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hopefully waiting for your precious comments
Comments
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I really like your take on the prompt.. you did an excellent job with your poem. beautifully written.
good luck
kat


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So Beautiful!!!!!!
You have penned a lovely and sensual poem. Soothing to the reader's senses. Thank you for sharing. You take care. Hugs and Smiles. Sandy




