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CONform

Pissing around in conformity,
Stuck in habitual ways.
Snippets of fleeting happiness.
Drowned in deadly gaze.

The eyes of a lifeless calf.
Surrounded by the air and victim of the wind.

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  • spirit rising
    December 13, 2008

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    you are right life can feel very much like this at times and you express this in a awsome way.
    " pissing around in conformity" are my favorite words in this. very well done for your creative take on life


  • Harlequin Dance
    December 13, 2008
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    Very nice.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    creative
    life can be a cycle that carries you going through repetitive motions,
    it is hard to off the cycle,
    sadly we never see the cycle until our life begins to slow down,

    well done my friend

    God bless you my friend...

  • OldHatAndCat
    December 13, 2008
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    Excellent!

    I am not a judge or a great critic. When I comment it is because the work is GREAT! Keep writing! KC