The greatest love
is now and who cares
it is not in the past
lives not in compares
Gloom of the past
unhealthy of the mind
believing that it was all
is sensibly unkind
Life is for living
a shame to waste away
for when time runs out
you shall not have another day
Love the one your with
like you never have before
open up your heart
and never close the door
Author notes
picture credit: Rosiehardy @ flickr
A contest entry
- #33 CONTEST (: by Walk-Free.
400 points, ended December 15, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a beautiful interpretation on the picture.
this poem made me sigh.
thanks for writing this and all the best
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aww.. this is beautiful -
so sweet, i love it.
you've clearly put a lot of thought and emotion into this. i also really like the rhyme in this, it reallly helps with the flow of the piece, i'm not normally a fan of rhyme!! i especially love the 3rd stanza.
best of luck in the contest you have entered!!
ElectricBloom
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