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Missing Words of Him




those insignificant thoughts
that danced across pages,
were lifelines of love

every day snippets
of a distant world,
carried along unseen threads

we watched that basket
of too hard grow mountains,
unable to be scaled

now I sit with echoes,
reverberating my own abyss

just a blanket of memories
to keep me warm

 



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Prompt: poem about missing someone or something

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  • geckogirl silver member
    December 15, 2008
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    So who is special now, way to go you...clappies


  • Cannonsfire
    December 13, 2008

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    Clever take on the missing him bit lol although I think I might know where this came from C


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    December 13, 2008
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    unique way of expressing it.
    Nice.


  • Walk-Free
    December 13, 2008

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    amazing metaphors here.

    really wowed me with this one.

    you did a great job in describing that frustrating feeling of being stuck. like your lift isn't moving anymore, if that made sense (:

    thanks for this brilliant write

    • fortyninereasons gold member
      December 15, 2008
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      thank you so much for the Gold. I still get that frustrated feeling at times but you learn to live with it.
      Juls

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