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Never Regret


You may enter my life
I make you my bride.
If worldly demons drive us apart
You shall remain my eternal light

When one door closes on us
my heart will remain open,
& I shall dwell & enjoy
our memories so precious

Your eyes may move on and forget
mine will relive glorious days,
without regret.
For you brought joy
& with our memories I kept
when bitter end you left

Armored myself with strength
as not to break apart.
I've been fragile while learning
to live with our hearts departed

Now I go on...
rising above the ashes
& my miseries I shall conquer.

Co Authored by Lisa Or widely
known as xianariaslifetime



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  • Soft-Rain
    December 13, 2008

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    We work well together, Your thoughts and heart were here. It was a pleasure to co: write with you.
    Always an honor!

    Hugs
    ~lisa~


    • theburninglegend silver member
      December 22, 2008
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      hey

      you changed your display pics, what an awesome,! lovely looks on the hair as always, great job my friend. I have learned so much from you.