There are remains of you and I,
sparkling prisms on the floor.
They are lost reflections of love.
Our love is a broken mirror.
Sparkling prisms on the floor.
Each dances with a memory.
Shared moments within our past
we have willingly thrown away.
They are lost reflections of love
no longer carrying the dream.
Somewhere they lost their special shine
and are now being swept away.
Our love is a broken mirror.
Cracks separating you and I.
It saddens me that I must know
you and I will not touch again.
In a list
A contest entry
- ♥give me love♥ options!♥ by Fallen-Phases.
450 points, ended December 15, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrite quickie. by Mango Memories.
400 points, ended November 20, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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emotionally strong.
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wow, i love this! a simply amazing write, i enjoyed the second stanza best, it had such meaning and life to it! (the very last line in the last one doesnt seem to fit that well, but it all adds to the surprise)
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Wow thnak you so much for the gold it is an honor and thanks for running the contest Awesome prompts!
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i love the strong emotion in each word as you read this poem, never a wasted letter,lol, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Extrodinary
I loved the broken mirror comparison to a loved lost and broken up...and sweeping those pieces away, the title is an awesome pick...just loved all of it...blessings.
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