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Oh Heart

Oh heart..! Oh Love..! Oh Life..!
The inspiration of all dreams;
The power of all pure extremes!
Determination undefined
Glorious and purely divine!
Beat; consume my soul
Open up and swallow me whole!
Such ambiguity! Such determined goal!
Reasoning without control!
Waste not; that which feel’s inside
For it beats like rolling tide!
Controlling every daily urge
To be wanted more and more!
Eternally, “yes”... this defines the Word!
Hunger that knows no reserve!
To be yours and only yours
Oh my Heart, keep beating on!
For the beating wakes my soul!
And showers my life,
Through every toil!




How often have you cried and felt betrayed?

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  • Despinas1
    December 13, 2008
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    Sadly much too often