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Table Time is Happy Time :)

One times one, went out for FUN
And come back with the number ONE

Two times two, went through the DOOR
And came back with the number FOUR

Three times three, went out to DINE
And came back with the number NINE

Four times four went to the DEAN
And came back with number SIXTEEN

Five times five went for a DRIVE
And came back with a TWENTY FIVE

Six times six went out to MIX
Came back with number THIRTY SIX

Seven and seven lost track of TIME
And stayed back home with FORTY NINE

Eight times Eight, fell on the FLOOR
They stayed back too with SIXTY FOUR

Nine times nine went out for SUN
And came back with friend EIGHTY ONE

Ten times ten went out for BREAD
And returned with a BIG HUNDRED!

A contest entry

I tried to keep the poem as simple and precise as possible to make it easy to learn for kids and also to not take their mind too away from the tables

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • ea silver member
    January 13

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    OMG, you did a GREAT job on this. Heartfelt congrats - I have to print this out for my six-year-old. LOL about your 84, I had the 9 X 9 at 89 or some wrong thing myself originally.


  • Zenda-Lokki silver member
    December 15, 2008
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    Lol just love it!!!!!!


    • RT KatPat
      December 15, 2008

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      hahaa! thanks
      I'd be thrilled if kids in some part of the world enjoy tables cuz i took time off and wrote a verse which they understand and enjoy


  • Griswold
    December 13, 2008

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    Now this is more what Im looking for, simple and easy for the kids and still rhyming fun. Although you really needed my 8 x 8 rhyme because the answer is 64 not 84. Very well done, best of luck... Scott


    • RT KatPat
      December 13, 2008
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      Oh shoot... i didnt realise i did that... will fix it right away!

      • Griswold
        December 13, 2008
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        That was just classic, I laughed so hard... i knew it was a mistake, but THAT one of all of them... Too darn funny. The irony didn't escape me...

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