I love you
Your pain
Your suffering
They way you create sadness
You have an effect on people like no other
I can't wait
Wait for you to take me
To hold me and absorb me
To feel your darkness surround me
and engorge me
You are dark
You are sad
You are pain
You are ail
You are death
Take Me!
Author notes
Picture Prompt : don't fear the reaper by XEternalxrestX found on deviantart.com
A contest entry
- picture prompt by trekkergirl.
400 points, ended December 22, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - When Light No Longer Rose to Kiss Me... by Carpe Noctem.
875 points, ended January 12, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is very well written. Question tho next to the last line you have ail... do you mean all... is this a misspelling? Hitting the wrong key and all. I do it all the time. Good take on the picture prompt tho. I do like this.
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no, i meant ail
but thanks
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I am sadened by one who wishes to give up on life...This was written very well, Good luck in this contest!
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