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Take My Heart

Tear it out,
sew it up,
hear me out,
blow it up.

Chew it up,
spit it out,
watch the blood,
as it flows out.

Stomp it hard,
chop it to,
do all these things,
im begging you.

Go on babe,
it's shattered enough,
yeah your right,
I have it tough.

Author notes

Simple note- This has been getin dusty in meh notebook. So I typed it up and added the last paragraph.

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  • catz Moderators member
    January 22

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    I think our hearts are the most used and abused of all... and yet we keep on exposing them to life, as it should be.
    Your poem is very interesting, some unique thoughts going on here

    Dee


  • RainbowLoversHotlin
    December 27, 2008
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    okay???


  • Naznomarn
    December 13, 2008
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    Fair enough [=~
    *Pats*