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White Prayer

She prays
for the lost world
full of sin
yet somehow full of grace.
She whispers
He falls
War was held in his hands.
She sighs,
He dies.
The angels' light is forever lost,
through time,
it fades..
Evanesce like a spirit,
so shocked,
like the aegis once protecting
the sinners from themselves.
She cries
The world dies
A new one will be reborn
from the sad whispers
held within
her White Prayer....

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 4

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    great write...I really like the ending.

     


  • Shancy Fayre
    January 4
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    A good poem. Thank you for entering. Shancy.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    Hmm...very spiritual a write...Her prayers are powerful...though seemingly lost...they make a difference....Powerful write of rhyme and flow...