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I Will Never Forget You

It is so hard not to cry,
I wasn't ready to say goodbye.
I know you are in a better place
and i will always remember your smiling face.

I remember Sunday school and going to pizza inn
I can't believe how long it's been.
I will never forget Camp Harmony and playing red rover.
In my heart those days will never be over.


I know you are in a better place
standing in the Lords embrace.
I know your happy where you are
and in our hearts you'll never be far.

Even though you have part
you will always be in our hearts
Aunt Linda we will always love and never forget you.
This much i know is always true.

It is so hard not to cry,
I wasn't ready to say goodbye.
I know you are in a better place
and i will always remember your smiling face.

Author notes

I cried writing this poem it was really difficult for me to write. Aunt Linda passed away: Monday 12/08/09

This really means a lot to me!

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  • Winged Unicorn
    January 16
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    Heart warming!

    Truly a terrific right. I'm very sorry for you loss but I feel you found the perfect outlet for your emotion and the perfect way to finally be at peace with your loss. I hope this helped you to say goodbye at least in part. From your words and the emotion behind them it is obvious that she was a wonderful aunt and person. Thank you for sharing.


  • thefacadeoftheheart
    December 18, 2008

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    thats really good and really sad i'm so sorry i know she meant a lot to you and i know how hard this is i am praying for you just hang in there


  • wiltedvamp18
    December 14, 2008

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    im sorry

    im sorry for your lost i know how hard it is to go thru a death sometimes u wish u could have saved that person, and wish that it could have been us instead. We hear their voice and we wish that they could help us with the answers to everything were stuck with. beautiful poem!


  • SunDew
    December 13, 2008

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    I am so sorry about that, Micah. I know how hard it can be to let someone go after they've died. It sounds like you were really close to your aunt. Look on the bright side (I know it doesn't help right now, but it will later): she's with Jesus in Heaven with all the most beautiful things around her. Gold is so plenteous she walks on it! She will watch over you for the rest of your life.

    If you want to know: (if not, just skip it)

    and i will always remember your smiling face
    ~the "i" should b ecapitalized
    pizza inn
    ~sounds like the name of a place - Pizza Inn
    Lords
    ~Lord's
    I know your happy
    ~you're
    Even though you have part
    ~sounds awkward - maybe part should be parted?
    and i will
    ~And I will

    If you didn't want the suggestions, I'm sorry. I hope none of them offended you.


    ~Bright


  • Soft-Rain
    December 13, 2008

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    Aww hun my heart breaks for your loss.
    This was sad for you and your family, you have made your words a beautiful dedication to your Aunt...who must have had a sweet tender soul.
    She is with Jesus now, i know you will miss her.

    Love
    mom (under my other name)


  • Hope Angel silver member
    December 13, 2008

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    My friend's Aunt Rita died the other day too.
    I'm sorry for your loss, but you will see her again soon. And she will always be with you wherever you go. A million hugs for you.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    It is hard when your whole life seems to be ripped from you I am going through that now it sucks and it is not getting any better it seems I am sorry that you are having to go through this


  • Vampirette1901
    December 13, 2008
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    i like. i'm really sorry for your loss

  • FallingRainDrop
    December 12, 2008

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    oh hun this seriously brought tears to my eyes. losing someone close is so hard. my aunt recently passed away too so i can relate to this poem so much and I know how you feel. hang in there. peace and love hun.

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