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Overflowing

Riding this trough
Waiting for the incline
As the sorrow builds over the love

Fear grips me now
While I sit in my silence
Scared out of a brief happiness

I feel like I'm breaking
Not only myself
Through my need to please

Then he looks at me
And it all melts away
And hurts all the more when he's gone

For it is not he
Who should love me
Yet it is he that I yearn for

In those arms
I am drugged helpless
Aware but uncaring for reality

He whispers to me
It is worth the hurt
To be overflowing with joy.

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  • Skawe
    December 13, 2008
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    is this about who i think it's about kiki?

    • This thing doesn't tell me anymore when I get comments on my poems. And it is about Stevo and how he is far better than I.