I began to fall for you when in reality you were not as though you seemed. You made me feel as though you liked me for me but it was all just a joke. Maybe some where deep what you say is what you feel. In the end as it turns out I was just your pawn and you were the master of the board controlling my each and every thought and move. Well this is no more because I am now free, free of your grasp and can now finally see the flaws in what you thought were your perfected plan to forever keep me in the dark. What am I to do because I still will have these feeling that I feel for you? For now I will just have to cope with the pain that you caused me. I find it kind of funny because I was so set on not letting my self get in to deep and not to be hurt again. Because now the pain keeps cutting me like a thousand stabbing knives and is much too much for me to bear.
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Wow, I really like this. I love the line, "and you were the master of the board..." I've had relationships like this, going through one now...
The last sentance is kinda awkward to me... "Because now the pain keeps cutting me like a thousand stabbing knives and is much too much for me to bear." Cutting and stabbing don't seem to flow to well.. why not try using a different word such as piercing or stinging? Very good poem! Thanks.
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