I would have,
perished-
had
… … … crumbs
not brought,
me home
Author notes
thoughts of, crumbs
A contest entry
- yes, just 10 words here by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended December 13, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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aww
this is sad, you always come up with something
and this touched my heart...a beautiful shiney Gold, congratulations!!
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yay, you wrote beautifully and got the reward
this reminds me tremendously how we're given the caveat as in Isaiah 55:2 'Why do YOU people keep paying out money for what is not bread,' to some starvation away from source of home made goodness per se if kept gentle versus fancy. spiritually paralleling provision of utmost (in arrangement) we can keep following, is how often or once nothing is like a mother's et al, slowly raised bread say with no short cuts etcetera.
So density of true wonder can be picked up from spill over to no skipped positive trail, when wanting comfort after waste of strength by extravagant consumption.
you displayed sustenance with staggering need,
called Carolyn -
how cleverly engaging... x
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This is a clever little take on the prompt.
Well done indeed poet.
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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i liked this one alot.. very good.
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