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vibrations.

do you hear
cymbals crashing

like your
voicebox

against
mine?

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prompt: noise
10 words

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  • Raw. Short, exquisite.
    How do you make the font smaller on the main textbox part?
    Nicely done.


  • purpleIronbutterfly
    December 16, 2008
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    its very simple yet almost tempting


  • letters to no one
    December 15, 2008

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    Ooooooooooooooooooooooh
    me likey

    it's all cryptic-like, or else I'm just too dumb to get it XD

    either way, I still really like =]

    Shelly
    x


  • chilali
    December 14, 2008

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    Wow. Great imagery! Loved this one! Keep i flowing

    Much love
    Ylova

  • ElectricBloom
    December 13, 2008

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    oh i love this,
    such beautiful, if not slightly twisted, imagery. i especially love the thought of voiceboxes clashing together.

    excellent write, and a very interesting take on the prompt.

    ElectricBloom


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 13, 2008
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    cleverly creative... x

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