a fleeting inflection
fades from fingered glass
my mirrored memories
collapse in heaps
of shattered shard
and bards of razorblades
that incise
post prismatic lies
the insides
A contest entry
- A blind girl at the mirror by Amazon Huntress.
850 points, ended December 14, 2008, 13 entries
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Fuckin' hell, what excellent imagery, amazing poem,
good luck man,
Alex.
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Short and sharp, this cuts like a knife. I love the fingered glass idea and the apparrent simpllicity in structure and phrase.
Kudos!
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wow...heavy and beautiful...a bleeding relief...dark and smooth...cool and sharp...dig this...sweet job with the prompt...love love it
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A pretty good take on the prompt...I agree with Chez, deep.
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Deep and well rounded this pain felt from reflected worries
C
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