Lustrous illusions of perfection.
a smooth cast
guilding gross deformity
You would call it my face
and you would be fooled
Intentions being of no regard
this mask will coat me,
though I strive for honesty
Author notes
based on
Afraid_Of_The_Dark_by_DarkAngelsRhapsody
on deviant art
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by fortyninereasons.
900 points, ended December 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What Went Wrong? (prewrites welcome) by Danna Hobart.
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Thank you for entering.
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I love the way you've written this, showing that we all wear masks, and yet we wish to strive for honesty...Great read! Bravo!
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Wonderful write; best of luck
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