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bring on the rain

Missing image
flowers waiting in expectation
maidens heart spread wings;
fly every where
in perfume filled air
with nature looking  upto sky.

skies no longer held clouds
heavy to reach out earth
dense with love,
dripped slow first
turned into down pour in time.

nature thirsty,
for this drips of ambrosia
compliment each other,
levers in unknown hands,
eyes can only beckon
ears hear melodies.

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  • maralisa silver member
    December 13, 2008

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    wow dad I love your take on the promt your imagery is just wonderful from stanza one through to the last good luck inthe contest maralisa