Have you come to see my world,
Where my kind roams the streets,
Of my self made realm of madness?
I like it here, for none say I am mad.
Author notes
Prompt: Photo (Original photo http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Image/68/77.jpg )
Word limit: 30 words
In a list
A contest entry
- 12/30/30 Quickie! by Sweet Impatience.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This one made me think, and I truely enjoy thinking. Great job! Thanks for entering, and good luck!
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I love your take on the prompt so so very much.. may I come there too? the ending is perfect in my book.. I really love the imagery that you have in this poem, the opening line is fantastic.
good luck
kat
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a wonderful take on the promt good luck inthe contestmaralisa
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I love this poem once again sis, you are more then a sofa, lol, no but really this is something great, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, princess
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Sweet, I like it.
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Wonderful write my lovely Meroza. Very well worded.
All the best to you love and good luck
Love
Alyzeh
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Very good, it is so nice to fit in, no matter where you are.
Wonderful....Best wishes in the contest
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Interesting take! I really like where you went with this..and well written piece as well.
Good luck
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This is so good! I love this - a world where none say I'm mad... If you ever get the address, share it please
A wonderful take Mer... Bravo to you.
Ken
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That goes to you too!
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