Nights may pass, and thoughts may last, a millenium. But the more i love you the more it hurts. So i'll just get to the point that's been tormenting so; but please promise me you'll never go! Promise to be there as the crimson sun fades! Because the pain is piercing my soul like a thousand blades.
Endless tears can't numb the pain; when you're so in love you've gone insane. I only wish you'd hold my hand, or stay with me where ever we stand. If you ask me to stay, I swear I will. But someday, if you hear me cry, be there to hold me tight...
Someday; maybe today, maybe tomorrrow, or maybe years from now, but it doesn't matter, as long as theres hope. For my loss is yesterday's sorrow, and today's celebration of a new tomorrow, and i'll soon learn to cope.
Someday you'll find how words can't explain how much I love you. But for now I'll wait, left wondering if you love me too.
I love you...
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A contest entry
- AIDS by peregrin.
550 points, ended December 13, 2008, 7 entries
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well writen


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Thank you so much for writing for my contest, it is sweet.
This is beautiful.
~~Gwen


