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Time stops when you're here, and so does my heart... we are so close yet so far away, time starts..... and I wish I couldn't feel my aching heart...THUMP.........THUMP..........THUMP.

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  • cool

    I really feel what ur trying to say i understand u.


  • ashley420
    April 30
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    aww

    i love it i like this one alot.....thx 4 the comments on my poem!!!!!

  • awwwww

    i love it oh yea mine waz about austin r


  • wesley14
    April 17
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    hay

    were is it @

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