A fighter,
with an impossible goal.
A rebel,
with no rhyme or reason.
I am a soldier,
above all else.
A soldier,
willing to fight.
A soldier,
with hopes and dreams,
that will never come true.
I am a soldier.
Author notes
I have been going through a lot of shit lately.
But I won't stop 'till I can't fight no more.
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #45 by Kuranya.
550 points, ended December 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A soldier of life, I like that, you created something special here. Best to you in the contest
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love your out look doll,
lol wish i could be more like that i am giveing in more and more each day and it sucks i am trying still it to seems worthless..loved the poem much and missed reading from you so it made me smile, take care vanna..xoxox
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Thank you so much, it helps to know that you all are still looking at my work.(:
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I really like the first two lines, this is a very powerful write, very moving.
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