staring reflections settle
dust scatters wildly
within the mirror, a opposite
within this hell, this heaven
the reflection gazes
mounted in time, frozen
the icicles lick its light
as it smiles back
luminescent glows flicker
upon the mirror, to forget
a memory the mirror falls
cracking its life, its soul
yet that is a reflection upon itself
the mirror cracks yet whole
for the world is backwards
time, life, words are all
reversed
illuminated within a mirror
backwards
To remember is always
to forget
the mirrors lies within
are the truths beneath
Author notes
"I always forget that a mirror image is actually backwards"- Credit Markgrif for the prompt.
I think I've done what the prompt deserved, I hope you like Mark
What you think?
Comments
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Very very good...powerful imageyr, great flow and a nice take on the prompt...hmmmm..u could write a lot of poetry about mirrors...maight have to try one day
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OH I think you did great.
A really strong ending. Nicely put.
Be Well
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hehe thanks mark, shame this wasn't a contest one lol would be good to see others view on the prompt
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